Saturday, June 18, 2016
D.P. LYLE GOES ROGUE -- AUTHOR OF DEEP SIX
KJ Howe hosting author D.P. Lyle, M.D.
I've had the pleasure of knowing D.P. Lyle, Director of CraftFest, for many years. Not only is he a cardiologist, an expert in forensics, and a guru in the craft of writing, he is also a award-winning author. I often wonder when he sleeps. Please welcome D.P. as my guest today where is talking about his strong female protagonists. Let's go Rogue...
KICK-ASS WOMEN CHARACTERS
by DP Lyle
Here’s a truth that men intuitively know about women: They are
smarter than we are and they don’t play fair. It’s true in life and can make
for wonderful fictional characters. In my work I have created three smart, tough,
kick-ass, and completely unfair female characters who I simply love writing
about.
Case in point—Samantha Cody.
Sam is not big, being 5-9 and a buck thirty, but you
never—never—want to challenge or threaten her. You see, Sam’s a cop and, oh
yeah, a professional boxer. If she can’t stop you with words—logic, threats,
pointing out better options—-she will with a mighty good left hook. This from Original Sin:
NOTE: Sam is out for an early morning country road run and is
confronted by the always pleasant Watson brothers.
“Why
do you feel the need to threaten everyone?” Sam said. “Don’t you see that
threats only make you seem more guilty.”
“You
need some manners.” Eric reached into the small cargo area behind the seats and
pulled out a coiled rope. “Maybe we should simply hog tie your ass and explain
how things are to you.”
“I
understand you two aren’t the brightest bulbs in the chandelier so let me give
you some advice. Don’t try anything stupid. People only get away with so much
stupidity and I suspect you guys have done a lot of stupid in your life. Sort
of living on borrowed time.” She smiled at them. “Take care.” Again she jogged
away.
The
truck loped along behind her. These guys were becoming annoying. Then the truck
moved up beside her yet again. As she looked toward them, the lasso fell around
her shoulders and suddenly tightened across her chest, trapping her arms to her
side. The truck sped up, forcing her to run with it or be dragged.
Eric,
twisted in his seat, both arms out the window, clutching the rope, laughing.
“Good day for a run isn’t it? Think you can keep up?”
The
truck’s speed increased slightly, Sam now in a hard run. She had to do
something. She managed to slip her arms free but the rope was now around her
waist. Before Eric could react, she grasped the rope with both hands, dug in
her heels, and came to a stop. The rope jerked free of Eric’s grasp. Good thing
he was stoned and his reflexes were slowed, his grip weakened. She loosened the
noose and stepped out of it. The truck stopped and he jumped out.
“Not
so fast. Missy,” he said as he came toward her. “Guess we’re going to have to
do this the hard way.”
The
hard way? Sam actually loved the hard way. She closed on him quickly, not
giving him time to think, set his feet, react to her attack in any meaningful
way.
The
voice of her old trainer, Jimmy Ryker, echoed in her head: Hit first, hit hard,
and keep hitting until they don’t move anymore. Sounded like a good plan.
The
left hook was perfect, the straight right hand better. The hook staggered Eric,
the right put him down. She heard the gear shift slam into park and the
driver’s door pop open. She stepped over Eric, who lay on the ground glassy
eyed and moaning, and met Elvin head on as he circled in front of the truck.
From the surprised look on his face, not exactly what he was expecting.
Probably thought she’d run. Two lefts and right took Eric down, too.
Time
to leave.
She
knew they wouldn’t be down long and she was three miles from town, from help.
She scanned the horizon, looking for some place to hide or at least get them on
foot where she had the advantage. She saw no refuge so she ran, hard, straight
ahead, along the edge of the asphalt, trying put as much distance between her
and them as she could.
Then there’s Claire McBride. My Dub Walker thriller series might
star Dub and his best buddy, tough as nails homicide investigator T-Tommy
Tortelli, but it’s their long time friend and Dub’s ex-wife-with-benefits
Claire that often stirs the chili. She’s an investigative reporter who doesn’t
suffer fools well—-especially Dub and T-Tommy. She doesn’t use her fists, as
would Sam, but rather her sharp tongue and sarcasm. From Hot Lights, Cold Steel—the second of three Dub Walker stories:
NOTE: Dub and T-Tommy are trying to find a way into Talbert
Medical to hopefully find evidence or at least to get a look around.
I went through the pictures again. Talbert wasn’t
wide open, but it wasn’t exactly a fortress, either. The chain-link fence was a
hundred or so feet from the building. The upper floor windows were about four
feet wide by six feet tall, the lowers similar in width but only two feet high.
All were the metal-framed, push-out type. A small white sign with red lettering
said, Protected by Gorman Security.
“I guess we could break in. Doesn’t look very
high-tech, and the guards seem disinterested.”
“Might work,” T-Tommy said.
Claire
sighed. “You guys are low-functioning idiots.”
“Because
we want to dig into Talbert?” I asked.
“No.
Because testosterone is a dangerous drug. You would butt a door down even if
you had the key in your pocket.”
“And
you propose what?” I asked.
Claire
rolled her eyes and took her cell phone from her purse. “What’s Talbert’s
number?”
T-Tommy
gave it to her, and she punched it in, waited a second, and then said, “Mr.
Talbert’s office, please. . . . This is Claire McBride, Channel 8 News. Is Mr.
Talbert available? . . . I’d like to arrange a meeting with him. . . . I’m
working on a story about minimally invasive surgery. I got Mr. Talbert’s name from
Dr. Liz Mackey over at Memorial Medical Center. I have a few questions I’d like
to ask him if he has the time. I’ll only need about fifteen minutes or so.” She
covered the phone and said to us, “She’s checking.” Then into the phone she
said, “That would be great. I’ll be there at three. Thanks.” She closed the
phone. “Now, that wasn’t so hard, was it?”
She
can be such a smart-ass sometimes.
Lastly, there’s Nicole Jamison. She’s the extremely beautiful,
ex-actress, current screenwriter love interest of reluctant P.I Jake Longly,
the protagonist of my new comedic thriller series. Nicole is smart and can drop
into her acting chops when needed if a dangerous situation lurks. From Deep Six:
NOTE: Jake and Nicole are on board criminal king pin Victor
Borkov’s Yacht attempting to garner information on a murder Barkov is suspected
of being involved in while also trying to isolate Borkov’s girlfriend Grace,
who they suspect knows the real story. All without letting Barkov know they are
investigating the murder for Jake’s P.I. father Ray and homicide detective Bob
Morgan. Nicole saves the day by writing her own script.
Borkov
nodded. “But you don’t work for your dad?”
“Nope.
Not that he doesn’t try to lure me into his world.”
Borkov
took a couple puffs on his cigar, exhaling upward, waving away the smoke. “I
hear he’s investigating that murder that happened over on The Point? The
Plummer woman?”
“I
wouldn’t know. Like I said, Ray and I don’t run in the same circles.”
“So
the other night. Out on Peppermill Road. Wasn’t that you that got a couple of
windows hammered out? Right near the Plummer home?”
This
was definitely not going as expected. What exactly did Borkov know? That we
were scamming him? That Nicole and I weren’t simply accidental tourist? How the
hell did he know about my confrontation with Tammy? Why would he know? He
obviously had connections within the Gulf Shores PD, and, if so, did he know we
were hooked up with Detective Morgan? That would be a game changer. Was my face
as red and sweaty as it felt?
I
glanced toward the pier, almost expecting to see Ray and Pancake storming the
Bastille.
“That
was my ex,” I said. “I was parked near her house. She took offense.”
“You
asshole.” It was Nicole. She slugged my shoulder. “What the hell were doing
over at that psycho’s house?”
“I
wasn’t. I was outside.”
Tears
welled in her eyes. “You promised me you’d never see her again.” She looked at
Borkov. “He’s addicted to her. Can’t seem to throw the hook. Every time I think
we have a future he does some shit like this.” She stood and tossed her napkin
on the table.
Damn
she’s good. And just might have saved our bacon.
“It’s
not that way,” I said, following her lead.
“Really?
What goddamn way is it then?” She glared at me. “Sometimes I could just
strangle you.” She stormed off toward the bow of the ship.
Grace
stood. “I’ll make sure she’s okay.”
I love each of
these characters. Though they have much in common, they are also very
different. But not in smarts and toughness. Each possesses those qualities in
spades.
So, how do you
create a great female character? Just like you would any other character—male
or female. Sure she can be beautiful, desirable, and very feminine but give her
flaws and skills that make her pop off the page. Remember, it’s character flaws
that often get your protagonist in trouble, and skills—often unknown to her
until she is forced to discover and use them—-that get her out. With Sam, she
is often too narrow in her thinking, too focused on the straight line from
point A to point B, and that leads her into dicey situations. But she has wit,
charm, smarts, and those deadly fists that extract her from danger. With Claire
and Nicole, they are beautiful women that are often taken for less than smart.
That’s a mistake. They can cut you up with their words and clever deceptions.
Never take either for granted.
Your character
doesn’t have to be physically overpowering but she must have some skills that
come to her aid at her darkest hour. Find those and use them and you will have
a true heroine.
D. P. Lyle is the Macavity and Benjamin Franklin Silver Award
winning and Edgar, Agatha, Anthony, Scribe, Silver Falchion, and USA Best Book
Award nominated author of both non-fiction and fiction (the Samantha Cody, Dub
Walker, and Jake Longly thriller series and the Royal Pains media tie-in
series). Along with Jan Burke, he is the co-host of Crime and Science Radio. He
has served as story consultant to many novelists and the screenwriters of shows
such as Law
& Order, CSI: Miami, Diagnosis Murder, Monk, Judging Amy, Peacemakers, Cold
Case, House, Medium, Women’s Murder Club, 1-800-Missing, The Glades, and Pretty Little Liars.
His next book, Deep Six,
is the first in his Jake Longly comedic thriller series and will be available
from Oceanview on July 5, 2016.
Thanks, D.P., for sharing your thoughts on strong female protagonists. Anyone have any questions regarding this topic or even forensics questions? Our resident expert is here, ready to answer.
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Thanks for your great blog and for visiting us here at Rogue Women Writers. You've created wonderful characters, although I challenge the notion that women are less likely to play fair than men. I'd like to agree that we're smarter, but then, I know some pretty smart men.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the post, Dr. Lyle! I own your Forensics for Dummies and absolutely love it. I'm looking forward to reading DEEP SIX, as well!
ReplyDeleteA great post, Doug. I enjoy your novels a lot, but then you write great female AND male characters! Deep Six rocks!
ReplyDeleteThanks for having on your excellent blog. Loved visiting. And thanks to all for your comments .
ReplyDeleteDP Lyle
Love this, DOug! And I could not possibly write without your forensics books! (HOw many authors (besides me!) have thanked you in the acknowledgments? xoxo
ReplyDeleteAs always, the Dr. in IN! You are the definitive expert my dear - thanks for posting such a great article!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Hank and KC.
ReplyDeleteHank--Yes you did---for DRIVE TIME--a great book--and I am grateful. The full list--at least the ones I'm aware of--is on my website bio page: http://www.dplylemd.com/author-bio.html
KC, you are the best agent on this little old planet.
Indeed, the man knows no rest. Keep pumping, Doug
ReplyDeleteRonnie Boles
Huntsville, Alabama
HI Doug -- Terrific article about your super female agents! Love the fact that you "write women" so well. We also enjoy all of your advice and postings for other thriller writers. You are indeed a valuable resource. Thanks for being on this site today!
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ReplyDeleteFascinating post. I think your point about building female characters just like any other character is an important one. Look forward to enjoying more of your work.
Thanks to all the "Rogue Women" for asking me to be a guest on this great blog. We'll do it again down the road.
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks to each of you for your comments.
Great post, Doug. Thanks for guesting. I echo the sentiments about your being an invaluable resource, and also agree with your point about building female characters.
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